All Comments on 'The Shared Wall Pt. 02'

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MedicalpeteMedicalpeteabout 2 years ago

That is one SEXY story! Thank you for entertaining me!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Sorry, but no way she goes back to the sissy boy Alex. She belongs to Tom now and you may as well write it into the story. Age difference doesn't matter, Tom rings all her bells, Alex is a wimpy cuck. No woman would stay with him when such passion is experienced with another. You've introduced the emotional side to it, so bring it to the only reasonable conclusion. Alex out on the curb, crying like the little girl he is for giving his wife away to a real man.

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My ‘For Display Only’ series, number 07 is coming out Wednesday, 4/02. I’ve become a bit enamored with my heroine, Mara, and I hope some of you have as well. I welcome comments and suggestions. On occasion I have implemented suggestions. Thanks for the personal and public comm...

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