All Comments on 'The Sheath'

Well written, good grammar and spelling. But.... I don't like being too critical because I know writing fiction is rather difficult. And my criticism is probably partly because SPH isn't my kink.

She said Tyler had a 5"er. While that isn't big (indeed a little below average), it isn't small. Well within one standard division. I understand some females prefer larger, but if that can't satisfy her, that is a "her" problem, not a small tool problem. Second.. Carrot cock? Just like dicks, carrots come in all shapes and sizes. Unless his dick is orange, calling it a carrot doesn't really tell the reader anything.