All Comments on 'The Shoe's on the Other Foot Ch. 01'

by blaperino

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RowanWritesRowanWritesalmost 2 years ago

I like the story, but there are some typos and tense changes… and it’s too short! I hope there is a part two coming soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Five stars!!! please carry on it's Fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hopefully we will see the second part very soon. I want to her what happens back stage. also waiting to here more about the footnatic tenant. Pappasleaze!

ConstructiveConstructivealmost 2 years ago

Really enjoyed it! I hope we see more action next chapter and actually see the change in their dynamic. Great wirk 5 stars

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