All Comments on 'The Shopping Trip'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sexy

Sexy story. Would have liked to have read more about her ordeal, how her body moved and shook a she walked. Looking forward to a sequel or so where she's caught nude again in public, and people ogle her.

DarkOrange43DarkOrange43over 8 years ago
Love this story so much.

Thanks for such a fun tale. I enjoyed the way it built up to Mandy's public humiliation at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good story but needs a better finish

Like the focus on what happened rather than just trying to build a complete physical description like most other stories around. Still, the ending is a bit erupt: what did Mandy do after this? How does she feel? Embarrassed to the point that she hated it? Or did she find it so hot and arosing that she can’t wait to do this again?

BarbieKenBarbieKenover 4 years ago
Nice Story

That was a fun read. Thanks

anifreikanifreikalmost 4 years ago
I dunno

Years too late now, lol. I think I'd have told madam supervisor something along the lines of "As delightful as it's been today, I don't think we shall ever set foot on the premises ever again." Should count herself lucky Mandy and hubby didn't complain to mall management.

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