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by JanusGoneAwry

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yukonnightsyukonnightsover 5 years ago
Now I See What You're Up To

Well, this was another perfectly written piece. A one scene story that actually worked. Fair warning: I will be stealing quite a few of your phrases and descriptions...because you have both the imagination and the vocabulary to keep it fresh and interesting from start to finish. This seemingly simple type of scene is actually very hard to do, IMO.

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She's a specter, an aurora of desires, floating above me in the dark Her slender arm pierces my chest, opening me like a yawn, frying my circuits with potential I lay locked in her gaze as she lifts my beating heart to her smiling lips My prone form shudders as her hungry t...