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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowabout 3 years ago

Lovely tease and more. Loved the slow build-up brought to a crescendo.

Thanks for sharing

Paul4playPaul4playabout 3 years ago

Very much enjoyed the build up from reluctance through to climax!

Excellent writing....full of emotional content and sensuality.

SailingforfunSailingforfunover 1 year ago

Hi,

You are so incredibly talented. I love this story and the word pictures you create.

Thank you for sharing your talent!!

Scott

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I prefer to leave most of my stories open-ended. This allows me as a writer to add on if my imagination allows or leave the story to play out in my readers mind. Currently working on my first book. Will share bits of it here. Please check my website for for book releases. I ho...