All Comments on 'The Shower Hog'

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ScottishTexanScottishTexan3 months ago

I have never held back my general hatred for one-page wonders. So consider me completely shocked by the fact that I'm going to give this one a high five! Fan-DAMN-tastic job! It's a crying shame that you didn't enter this into the 750 words contest! 5/5

Frankenstein1962Frankenstein19623 months ago

I hope their need to be clean leads them to other places. Cheers. Frankie

zooliciouszoolicious3 months ago

Definitely need more

FlamethrowFlamethrow3 months ago

Love the banter between the siblings as she gave him a hand-job.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This is the first of your stories I have read. I have been missing out. Technically perfect and after reading your bio it's obvious you know what you're doing. Great work. Keep it up. I'll be catching up and looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

When you need to get to work you need to get to work. This worked well.

Robinius1Robinius13 months ago
Pretty fantastic!

I never regretted not having a big sister - until now. Thanks for sharing.

GothOsTheC0njurerGothOsTheC0njurer3 months ago

It was a little short for me but not bad. I will read some of your other stories now.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

5 stars! Can’t wait. To see what happens tomorrow! Keep it going please!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

These two need a few episodes together.

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It is my goal, first and foremost, to write heartwarming smut the whole family can enjoy. With long, long gaps between updates. Enjoy my perversions! My rules for writing erotica: 1. Add something extra. Make your story funny, or heartwarming, or extremely weird. People will ...