by Oupa99
I gave you 4 stars. I agree that you shifted between 2 different names for each character. But overall it is a great story. Please keep writing this story. I would love to see them get married and have her start popoing out his babies.
The Showgirl and the Engineer is an example of how an outstanding Romance story should be written, with a good introduction, an excellent plot, and interesting and appealing main characters. In this chapter, this lovely story never lets up or drags for a moment. It gets 5 stars only because it can't get 6.