All Comments on 'The Sissy of Hawthorne Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Liked for first 2 chapters, not a fan of the direction it’s going. All of a sudden she’s a whore with a pimp and handlers, no say in her life? Not for me, first 2 chapters were good, even the poker game.

alladinstardukealladinstardukealmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for your feedback. You’re supposed to hate this chapter. You can’t show something beautiful without showing something ugly.

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I write titillating cautionary tales. I found myself near the end of my teenage years in the late nineties. I focus on that period frequently out of nostalgia. I’m an advocate of yes means yes. My stories often portray the grey area of consent. Implied consent that isn’t ...