by Red24797
I like the story, but there are many word choice errors—incorrect homonyms (eg reign for rein, etc).
Thank you for the feedback, perhaps I need to find myself a proofreader!
I honestly dont know how i feel about this reluctant dom... in as much as he speaks about considering others.. he does the most to avoid what others think and feels, and needs to be cornered into being forced to admit and recognise what is happening beyond his own reasoning ( which is still forceful in an irratatingly ammusingly way ).. I just hope he doesnt turn out to be a bitch that secretly wants to bottom.. with a slave topping him emotionally.
>gay top.....I agree with One the whole notion of being a bottom disgusts me. I like these kind of stories I just pretend all the girls are cute twinks I work with..... but someone tie me up no..... And not just no but fuck no