All Comments on 'The Sky Kingdom Ch. 09'

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EmanresEmanresover 1 year ago

Love this series

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I like the story, but there are many word choice errors—incorrect homonyms (eg reign for rein, etc).

Red24797Red24797over 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you for the feedback, perhaps I need to find myself a proofreader!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Keep going!

onecuriousreaderonecuriousreader9 months ago

I honestly dont know how i feel about this reluctant dom... in as much as he speaks about considering others.. he does the most to avoid what others think and feels, and needs to be cornered into being forced to admit and recognise what is happening beyond his own reasoning ( which is still forceful in an irratatingly ammusingly way ).. I just hope he doesnt turn out to be a bitch that secretly wants to bottom.. with a slave topping him emotionally.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

>gay top.....I agree with One the whole notion of being a bottom disgusts me. I like these kind of stories I just pretend all the girls are cute twinks I work with..... but someone tie me up no..... And not just no but fuck no

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I'm new to writing and testing out some erotica novel writing on here. 21/03/24: Apologies for the delay. Sky Kingdom Chapter 24 has finally been submitted (24/03 small update - still waiting on Lit to publish but it hasn’t been rejected…yet) For those interested in chat, ...

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