All Comments on 'The Slave of Dystonia Ch. 02'

Roll on Ch3

What masterfuljim said

Don't keep us hanging too long!!

very good but far too short. I think it would be beneficial to put out a chapter with more substance and length even if it means waiting a bit to put it out. Writing was great but when it ended I was extremely disappointed

I like your storytelling and general writing style (except for some typos). However, two chapters gone and we're still waiting for something remotely arousing or titillating.