All Comments on 'The Slave of Dystonia Ch. 02'

I like your storytelling and general writing style (except for some typos). However, two chapters gone and we're still waiting for something remotely arousing or titillating.

very good but far too short. I think it would be beneficial to put out a chapter with more substance and length even if it means waiting a bit to put it out. Writing was great but when it ended I was extremely disappointed

Don't keep us hanging too long!!

What masterfuljim said

Roll on Ch3