All Comments on 'The Slave Traders Pt. 03'

Assuming this series is a first effort, and that English isn't your native tongue, do yourself, and your readers, the favour of finding and using a good Editor to help you proof your work before posting. As it is, the numerous grammatical problems here make this pretty brief / simplistic story nearly unbearable to read.

it's totally screw up, sorry.

Great ending!

Wouldn't it be great for a follow up story telling us how their relationship worked through this experience and the possible new pleasures.

And you know they should stay together but have men come in and use them as they have grown to need to be used. Once used like that and no one can forget or go back to vanilla sex.

Another episode please.