All Comments on 'The Sleep Over Pt. 01'

That was really hot. Look forward to the next chapter. Hope it's not too far off

Interesting. Why did he ask Tom who next is he wanking.

Good effort.

Keep writing.

Really well written. You draw the reader into their yearning circle. Wish so much I were there with them. (And I'm hoping that Tom meets up with Tony's Dad later in the night!)

More please! 🙂

Wow! I always wanted something like this to happen. I had the pleasure of doing to of my straight friends but I wanted them together. Hot story! Please continue.

Excellent story. Look forward to more.

Terrific story with great descriptions of bodies, smells, desires and lust! Looking forward to more chapters!

Can't wait to hear the rest of this fucking hot story! Is Tom going to bottom for the other three?

It was a bit long but it made me remember my first encounter with my friends. At least I thought they were my friends.

I like it…so believable too!