All Comments on 'The Slow Burn'

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AzPilotAzPilotabout 14 years ago
The word poignant comes to mind quickly. Strongly appealing is a term that fits.

I thought it was a well crafted story. In real life, slow is always best and your descriptions brought tha out very well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Good Story

I thought it was a good story and slow is more erotic than fast though but good story really liked it.

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