All Comments on 'The Slumber Party'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Nice work

I often wondered how these parties could avoid turning into an orgy--Now I see that I was correct

Ha Ha

0ra11yfix8ed0ra11yfix8edabout 18 years ago
Not enough

This story has so much potential. The scene is arousing but there is a lack of dialogue, let the characters speak and see where they go!

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