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by NatashaTsarinaPublishing

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good plotline everything. Character building, maybe make the man a hot stud. Kinda weird when it's a creepy old man

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Hackneyed and predictable, a good read just the same.

Need to proofread better. Is English your second language.

Keep on writing!

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