All Comments on 'The Soccer Mom'

Tightly crafted story with intense, quick sex just what would be expected under circumstances and then a simmering pause. You’ve created a storyline with a bit of erotic suspense that could wander in several directions. Glad to see “to be continued” and FWIW so nice to see no “bra size” description of breasts — so many better ways to let the reader imagine.

Please , can we have more of your writing ! This was a wonderful story ! Thnx very much !

Glad you said that there is more coming. Love to hear more descriptions of all concern. This story can go in multiple ways. Maybe Julie will be with all three moms together or seperate, the daughters with the coach, mom daughter and coach julie so many ways. good lick and thank you for sharing.

Hot. Delicious. Thank you!

A very solid effort. A few wonky lines, but very enjoyable. I'll keep reading.