All Comments on 'The Spinster and the Boy Ch. 05'

Brilliant good to read a young man fucking the old women think you should continue with Monas girls and get the priest involved be good if his Mum came to visit and joined in 😊😊

You should continue with the daughters enjoying what their mother likes along with some other ladies of the church stopping by for a “spot of tea” as they say.

Maybe even having him father a child with of coarse hiss wife’s permission.

LOVED IT!! I cant wait for the next chapter!

Mona has to give them two kids. Remember she is probably already pregnant. It's not over!!!

I will never tire of these two so the shenanigans can easily continue. You even have some new players that could be brought in pretty easily. As a writer it’s up to you what you wanna write about, as a reader I have to tell you that I love the story you’ve told and the many places it could go.

As always thank you for sharing.

What a cool story. Could read more if you choose to add another chapter.

More.more.moreMore.more.moreMore.more.more

What a great place to end this story! (Always leave the reader hanging.) You took an almost impossible coupling, sent them through a courtship and marriage, with the added benefit of several subplots. It's perfect to simmer for a while. Move on to you next story, or two, or three. This is one you can always return to and please a welcoming crowd,

Would truly love to read another chapter with mona..pretty sure she's pregnant and maybe her daughter being worked into the story.

I loved the addition of Mildred and Doris to the story. Please keep adding to this story!!

wow more of this please

What a wonderful series, loved each one more than the previous one

I’d love another chapter, perhaps something that includes Mona’s daughters!!

Fun series which I enjoyed immensely up until the last two chapters which for me, contained too much implausability. The Mona scenario didn't add up (how do you disappear from a house with a husband and umpteen kids all day without causing alarm for the whole family?), and I was happy that Mrs Handcock finally accepted his marriage proposal, but then you didn't even have them consummate the marriage, turning them and seemingly half the congregation into no-quarms sluts and lotharios.

For me, the whole enjoyment of the story was the relationship at the core and the great sex, love and respect they'd developed. This was sadly lacking in the final chapters. Shame, because it hot and fun for three chapters. Glad you didn't go down the suggested gang-bang route, but I think it's heading down an equally silly route right now so stopping is a good thing.

Also pleased you recognise the need for an editor as a 'basketball bat' of a dick and 'fuck me know' were laugh out loud funny for the wrong reasons. Hope you've found someone who will cut out the errors and help you lose the capital letter sentences and over use of exclamation marks.

Sorry if all that seems hyper critical but you have a lot of talent, a great turn of phrase, are a natural storyteller and have received a lot of deserved praise, and so I hope you can appreciate a more balanced view which will help you moving forwards.

I read all the comments to my stories. Usually they’re pretty positive... people that don’t like what you’re writing rarely read the whole thing so negative comments are rare. And then there’s the condescending MR AMSTERDAM. Thanks for nothing you patronising wanker.

Please continue! I'd love to see more of doris and mildred

totally enjoyed this chapter and would definitely await the next...

please need more, love this.

Loved the lot of them

Very hot n sexy story.... i specially enjoyed the young boy's anal episode with Dorris, towards the end.

Bring more of Dorris again. Let the boy have Dorris again.

Your story Pete is extremely magnificent and really marvelous. It's a great story and a dream for any normal young guy. I would love to see a new series of stories with Doris as star. My idea is that Doris is transformed in a sex leggy goddess and a head turner to young hunks. She wears skimpy bikinis in the beaches and micromini skirts, high heels in bars, restaurants and cafe's and seduce hunks with amazing leg shows. Doris introduce the young guy in hot mature ladies over 65yr and start to organize parties with a lot of sex.

The story was magnificent and exciting. You can characterize the story as awesome and superb. I am in love with Doris and Mildred with Doris in the first place. She really turns me on. My idea is that Doris is transformed into a leggy sexy goddess and a string of toy boys are asking her for uncountable days and nights for sex. She starts visiting gyms and after a month she starts to wear skimpy bikinis leaving nothing to imagination, micromini skirts, high heels and stockings in the cold months. She visits regularly beaches, bars, cafe's and malls mostly alone but there are times where she makes visits with her friends in order to seduce young hunks in their 20s with aim to pick them up in a hotel suite or in her home. Her friends are ladies between 65 and 80-85yr who love to seduce young hunks and they are dressed always extremely sexy. They all love micromini skirts and sometimes they do not wear pants in order to cause erections to young men. They also invite young guys for crazy sexy nights and not only nights. She and Mildred love to seduce young hunks with amazing leg shows. The waiters and the young clients in the bars losing instantly their minds when they look the mature hotties in the bar and get instantly hard ons. Some times they pay them with enormous amounts of sex and give them unforgettable lessons.. There is nothing hotter for me a guy in his 20s than mature hotties between 65 and 80-85yr. Spyros

Need more, have Harvey knock up Mona's girls...

More chapters of this story would be fantastic, but I appreciate it's been a year since the last post and you've likely moved onto different stories. Thank you for this lovely series.

Wonderful story. Wish Harvey would knock up Madison and Morgan, WITH TWINS! that would be great!

It was a great series. Enjoyed it immensely and well written. I’m going to be looking at mature women differently now. lol 😂

it was all a great story until the end!... just married should have been just the newlyweds consummating their marriage

Hey Huebie. You may be right but I do have a few ideas to keep this story going. I was thinking this latest might lead into a continuation?

I absolutely loved the story! I hope you will have some more for us, I love the old biddy to death!

It seems in this story that Harvey fucks Mildred's pussy after he just gets done fucking Doris in her asshole. If this situation were to happen in reality, that would be a 'URINARY TRACT INFECTION' just waiting to happen!!

more plus

he needs to bed them both and breed them putting babies in them

Well played,

I would love however to see some of the ideas that seem to pop up in the mind of the nymphomaniac old lady get a chance to come to pass.

You should most definitely continue. The amount of loads I have been reading this is amazing

The story is extremely hot and amazing. I rate this story with 5 stars. As a young man in his 20s I had instant hard ons with Mrs handcock and Doris.I think you must continue these series of stories or start a new series with Doris as the star. I am mad about Doris and in love with her. She makes me hard in seconds a real goddess Any normal young man would love to have a woman like Doris lying next to him. Especially if she wears micromoni skirts and high heels. I am in the same line with previous comments. With regards. Spyros

Love it! This is an amazing scenario of erotica between a young man and much older women.

Could do without the lactation and the younger woman.

Mona pregnant with Harvey's kid?

What a amazing love story.

Beautifully told story with fun and great action.

Excellent to have Jocelyn and Harvey's relationship out in the open and recognised with a wedding. The Imagery of Jocelyn in her wedding dress 😜😜😜😉 advancing up the aisle to join with her younger husband. Looks like Harvey and Jocelyn have such an open marriage they can take as many lovers as they desire. Jocelyn with Mona . Doris and Mildred seeing what Jocelyn saw in Harvey 😎😎😎. The adventure goes on

The party after the wedding sounds like it will be legend in the local community for alll the Sex that took place. The older women in this are magnificent , they would make perfect swingers at parties and hot orgies 😜😜👍 Mona a delicious wild milf. Wedding guests Doris and Mildred Ultra Horny Older Goddesses , Very Kinky 😛😛😛😛😘😘😘. Not leaving out the Elder Bride Jocelyn ( 😛😛😛😘😘) risen from a dormant life before she met Harvey to one where now she has a toyboy as her younger husband and now transforms into a Mega Nymphomaniac . Jocelyn would still be the most powerful of the two in their marriage and knowing their desire for her young husband , she might

set him up again with Doris or Mildred maybe both or with another older woman . With Harvey distracted , Jocelyn could take other younger men of Harvey's age group with similar athletic build as lovers . Jocelyn could see the extra sex as part of a new exercise regime toning her body with each hot encounter helping her with her hunger for young erect shaft as often as possible. Helping Jocelyn reach her 100th birthday .

First of all congratulations for your series of stories spinster and the boy are great and a masterpiece.I would love to have the opinion of the previous comments what is his opinion for my idea that Doris and Mildred are transformed into sexy leggy mature goddeses and love to seduce and tease younger men in their 20s wearing miçromini skirts, high heels and microbikinis leaving nothing to imagination.. Spyros

Amazing work. But it needs a little more detail

Each chapter gets better and better. Practically professional quality

Still love this story, but.........

"The original eighteen months had stretched out for years and, truth be known, Harvey's parents had no intention of ever coming back..." This schoolboy is getting older than Jimmy Clitheroe. All non Brits and most Brits will have to look that reference up.

Ha! Yes. Thanks Princess. Yes. You’re dead right. I’ve been hoping nobody would notice. Maybe he’s keen to be a doctor but can’t get the marks he needs and has to keep repeating his final year? …or maybe it a time warp? …or a Dorian Grey thing? Please overlook it. I didn’t think the story would be so popular and I don’t know how to explain his perpetual youth.

Fair enough.

Apologies for not saying how good parts of this were.

Fantastic, enjoyable. Shame he never fucked his teacher nd his lovers together