All Comments on 'The Spur Ch. 08'

by Spartamac

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EGRIEGRI8 months ago

I'll admit I had a slow start with the out of the blue wench auction instead of some bellie dancing lessons or more interaction with AnaΓ―s and Jamila. The gap in timing between chapters made it a bit of a memory test who this fellow, Gerald, might be. However, after I switched into the shop scenario it became interesting. Jill sells this tale and it would be nice to hear more about Jeannie at some later point.

Looking forward to reading more about Jill, Jamilia and Jeannie .

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