by Elektrical
I love that this story is multifaceted. It's not a simple love story so it keeps me hooked. You write very well. Keep it up!
Damn i just finshed reading all 4 chapters. I was not expecting all of that. You really outdid yourself. This story is great . I hate reading about perfect chracters. I love layers of drama, personal issues and scarred flawed characters. Sette is priceless and she has 3 men in love with her flaws. Brent is a big baby, Fleet is just wimpy, James is kind of hard to read right now but there could be something there very interesting between him and sette.
Cant wait for the next update. Very good story. The sex scenes are off the chain. HOT!!!
Who knew she was a nympho??? Wow!! Well, I am hooked and want to see what Daddy" Top Cop" do. Also will Lysette get to use her birthday present?? So many questions, looking forward to the update!
is thinking with his little head. I hope you will wrap up the loose ends of why Lisette.
Brent is about to fuck and get fucked up. You don't involve other people- ESPECIALLY family. That's unforgivable..
And please don't leak her videos. That shit has lifelong consequences.
DON'T DO IT BRENT!!!!!