All Comments on 'The Storm'

sheesh

No way would a guy take her back. Come on.

So who is the father of the baby ?

Peter better put a chastity belt on her when ever she takes an alcoholic drink !

The number of stories in LW with the same wife’s explanation is staggering same old shit different story. Geez poor guy

Should’ve left them there. “I don’t know. Couldn’t find her. Figured she was in one of the other cars.”

But seriously, not realistic at all he would keep her.

I'm of the once-and-done clan so I didn't enjoy that very much. shame as the setup was really good. You even addressed the dark temptation to abandon them during the storm. that, plus taking photos/videos and their clothes would have been an interesting tale. "they already left with..."

Started strong and then just blaaah. Sorry.

Good writing, but you have a problem with good decision making. Somethings are unforgivable.

Anon wrote:

If Sibyl's story is true, she was sexually assaulted. She should have filed a criminal complaint with the police. If she declined to do so, the credibility of her story would become nil. As for Constance, no self respecting woman would remain in relationship with a sexual abuser.

100% agree and came to write basically the exact same thing. Of course, this story was written some time ago, so the sensibilities have evolved a little, but still.

I've been reading a lot of the Troubadour's stories recently and in every one the wife or girlfriend gets off Scot free after they have cheated. Now, I don't mind a reconciliation story but occasionally there should be some consequences for actions taken.

Mais quelle mauviette, cette histoire est de la merde et l'auteur doit vraiment aimer les cocus.

for an almost rape, why would he take the time to carefully fold his clothes? If she was trying to fight him off, a kick to the balls, or running while he is folding his clothes is an option. Overall, not a bad story.

He didn't let his stupid ego ruin his life

Que mierda acabo de leer.

0 estrellas y desearía que al autor le diera cáncer o algo asi

If Sibyl's story is true, she was sexually assaulted. She should have filed a criminal complaint with the police. If she declined to do so, the credibility of her story would become nil. As for Constance, no self respecting woman would remain in relationship with a sexual abuser.

Really? that's your story and idea of a life long marriage and love?

I hate wimp cuck stories!!! 1*

Dude's a retard and he gets what he deserves, I guess. Crap.

I was disappointed he didn't simply leave them there stranded for weeks with no bridge.

A so-so story of where the wife tells a wild story of being coerced. Not only does the husband believe her, he does nothing to the guy. Knowing how that guy is, she shouldn’t have been alone in the shed with him. Same’s true if she didn’t know. Hubby forgiving her leads him to not only be cuckish & weak, but despite what she says now, he’s setting himself up for a repeat, only this time, she’ll be more careful. The author stripped away his backbone & balls& had him believing her stupid-assed excuses/ reasoning ; the question why . 2 stars.

Ridiculous excuses from the woman and the guy believes her. I think I'm seeing a pattern here ......

Femdom agitprop.

anyone that constantly writes stories that have husbands excepting wives cheating is not on my like list. you are a man of no integrity..

3 Star.

Weak male allowed Randy to get off scot free. The man was a potential rapist and will return to his old ways unless checked hard and quickly. That didn't happen.

Only read a couple of this authors stories and get the impression he has the irresistible urge to make his male characters willing cuckolds, she knows of course that a little bit of pouting and some puppy dog eyes perhaps a well placed tear or two will have him happily accepting a future of the same treatment. Divorce is not in this authors wheelhouse.

I couldn't quite work out whether she's a junkie slut or a victim of rape. Her account of events is wildly contradictory but she needs to swerve the booze and drugs in future, that's for sure!

This author has his cheated on husbands forgiving infidelity almost before the act is completed. Just doesn’t ring true

She decided to just keep drinking. She decided to get high along with the drinking. Even though she knew that she tended to get horny. This pattern of behavior should show that she didn't care what happened and wasn't concerned about who, what, when, or where... She knew she would have sex and that puts all the blame on her choices.

Funny story of two cheaters getting caught and talking their way out of trouble. 'A sucker's born every minute.'

According to her story that sounded more like rape than anything, and her best friend is married to her rapist??? um that doesn't seem to give much closure

Well, she does get caught and makes a bunch of excuses. He takes some time off from her which is a very good idea. When he does get back together, she is forgiven which is very sweet for an end to the story. I would have probably made her wear a chastity belt with a GPS device added. I would have put a tracking device on her phone and other devices she may use. The nice shiny collar would be a visible part of her jewelry to show her trust in our marriage. Probably a pre-nup would be appropriate that she would not get anything if she slipped again. There would have been further rules to live by. Nice story and not a lot of people would let her off the hook so easily.

Well, good for them, I guess. I believe rapist Randy earned a significant ass kicking. Maybe a nice visible scar to remind him what a piece of shit he is!

Misandrist, largely incoherent horseshit. IRL, the rape claim would betaken for what it likely would be - a lie by a slut trying to avoid responsibility for what she did.

One of your least appealing. They get married ASAP? I'd need a lot more time. Randy's "punishment" is to walk to his car nude? WOW! How fiendish! Why would he need help on his beer run? No restitution for her damaged clothing? If I had not read your "An Angry Man" I would be regarding you as a woman trying to pass as a man. No testosterone in this story. Wimpy from start to end. Far and away the least enjoyable or believable of your stories. There is also the fact that being drunk or high by choice negates any attempted excuse. You did it to yourself, pay the piper.

The whole mess doesn’t make any sense. There isn’t a conclusion. Very shoddy

2 stars

The problem with this story, is she claims it's rape, which is why he immediately gets over it, but.. no one calls Randy a rapist? It's just a "oh you philanderer you!"

It takes any credibility out of this story, you can't cry rape and then laughing bat your rapist on the back and say "good on ya for not raping anymore!"

Either she was raped and he's a rapist or she cheated and is a cheater.

Like the premise, but the execution was far from the mark.

Peter is such a fool Once a cheater ALWAYS a cheater (jaybee186)

Perhaps not Peters kid. She chose to get high and fuck around. Petey is a fool.

First time through I didnt mind it but now that I reread it, clearly this was meant as a cuck-lite story and the writer tried very hard to find ways to make her have no blame in what she did.

Yet, everything she did lead her to that fateful fuck...She is no less to blame than Randy was.

I thank the gods you turned from writing.

The logic forming the foundation of this tale is broken. One must have clear concise logic for the main story train or the reader is left behind unable to suspend disbelief and of course the entire thrust of the story splinters into do as you wish chaos, The key break in this chain is the core nature of Sybil as revealed by her actions NOT HER WORDS. She chose to fulfill a momentary whim to fuck her old boss who had sent both her fiancé and his wife on a 2 hour beer run to clear the playing field for their tryst at his new cabin. They get caught in flagantre dilecto by the fiance, It is clear though that that guys dick did not suddenly appear between her legs. No she freely admits that she chose to follow him to the new cabin, she choose to take another drink on top of the others that was laced with date rape drugs, she chose to kiss, fondle, spread her legs, and fuck him like a bunny. Afterward while appologizing profusely for the pain and hurt she caused her fiance by getting caught; she rationalizes and displaces her core choice to have the sexual encounter. In short, her inner core holds her fiance and her upcoming marriage in sufficient contempt to permit her to gather a little strange as long as she doesn't get caught. That is an epic fail and the cuckolded fiance choses to dump her like a used disposable diaper, Up to here, the logic train works...she is a slut and you simply cannot marry a slut.

After that it starts breaking down. The cuckold then makes the strange leap of faith that she just made a mistake...and he can build upon that as they renew their "relationship." His acceptance of Sibyl's prodding...his acceptance of Constance demonization of Randy, and his acceptance of the fantasy that Sibyl became a sexual zombie.. unconsciously walking through that Randy Sibyl tryst solely because of the "evil seducer" Randy's actions upon a compliant zombie Sibyl. Here you see the cuckold move into wimp land...giving Sibyl...an utterly dumbfounding and warrantless free ride ticket back into a marriage without any repentance or other actions on her part whatsoever. Nothing has changed in Sibyl's core personality....her continued actions demonstrate that she can and will act on her selfish impulses in the future...because she has been given a free ride pass after being caught with no repentance whatsoever. Their marriage thus is a sham because the Cuckold and the slut wife obviously have two entirely different definitions for the term marriage. Hers includes free ride ability to act on whatever momentary sexual impulses she encounters with no repercussions whatsoever. Trust, fidelity, unconditional love, all the other frameworks of valid marriage mean absolutely nothing to this woman. Her marriage is nothing more than ephemeral vapors of moment to moment emotions.

This huge split in logic is easily discerned by even the dullest reader... She has betrayed her future husband in the most blatant manner. Said cuckold has forgiven her without any changes in her behavior or expressed regret at anything other than being caught. His action of reconciliation do not make sense because they are based on utter illogic. The author has thus utterly failed in the broken logic train and the reader does not believe or get involved in this story.

Result is an epic fail regardless of how well written...2 stars

WACC

Good story

This story is worthy of a real cuckold. You have expressed your feelings very well. Oh, if only 99% of all men were like you, real cuckolds! Just imagine what kind of work we normal men would have to satisfy your sluts!

Who is the person that has no clue as to what a story tag should be? Those tags inspire nothing. Try "Cheating caught in bed, forced sex, drunk and high., dangerous bridge, flood"

[continuing] would have been obvious before the 5-month mark.

If she was really repentant, Sybil needed to get tests done before showering and charge Randy with rape. Won't work, since she pounded on his chest and back but neglected to mark his face, but puts everyone on notice.

To yesterday's Anon: 5 months out, if the child was Randy's, it would have been pretty obvious before that. Morning sickness or weight gain ("I had tits, for the first time ever!")

Author hasn't published for years. The stories from this author never seem to have a definitive ending as though author leaves it to the reader to imagine the ending. The end of this one is Pete the father or is it Randy.

Reading this again after some 7 years, it still seems to capture my attention. The story appears to have been rewritten a couple of times, at least. Consequently some minor but troubling sequence of events errors have crypt in.

All in all a good read after 20 or so years since Troubador penned it.

very incomplete. randy should have been charged with rape, or I would not have taken her back. Also Randy needed a kick in the nuts in the cabin.

Neither alcohol nor drugs are an excuse for anything

She was sober when she took her first drink or toke and could have stopped there

Nothing sounds likeit was her fault? Is she 12? An adult is morally responsible for his actions, and that includes drinking, doing drugs, and getting yourself in bad situations. IRL it would be impossible to say if she's telling the truth, but even if she is, she is too immature and irresponsible to be made someone's wife. She's a poorly behaved little girl in a grown-up body. RAAC

As a story, garbage. If Sibyl was telling the truth, why did they not report Randy for rape?

MC is a wimp who is just asking to be disrespected let alone cuckolded.

Evah_Rheddy

He apologizes because she cheated? Ugh.

Incredible the number of women who accidentally end up on the end of some man's cock. Imagine being that dumb and insisting they should have equal rights. Judging by this and hundreds of other stories, they shouldn't even be allowed to vote. Or step outside the home without a carer. ROFLMFAO

Another story where it's not the wife's fault because she was drunk or tricked blah blah blah. I get that you prefer to right RAAC stories but can you at least give the husbands some sort of self respect instead of making them so wimpy? The reactions they have to finding their spouse with another man is so pathetic and hard to take.

Geeze, stupid games authors play. Charge Randy with rape, get a rape kit done, take him to court on the basis of workplace philandering and all the meanwhile work with Constance about how that relationship should live or die.

She used the old “too much booze and pot make me horny” excuse. Randy got off pretty light for what was a rape. Not a favorite story.

I enjoy a reconcilliation as much as 'the next guy' but even given the apparently 'long enough' time between the drunken sex and the 'announcement' I am skeptical that Sibyl hadn't been keeping a little secret( it would be too early to 'show') or even an interim meeting with Randy and so on.....since 'she had done nothing wrong' I guess its OK! This whole story is an insult to the reader and completely mishandled at the 'plot' level. 1 gave it 2** (more than it deserved)

Nope...generally I like this writer but this was weak.

This did it in for me "Peter apologized to her."

To all those commenting...

"Y'all a bunch a HATERS !!!"

Again I gave Troubadour a 1 star rating.

After giving 5 stars to others he wrote.

I’m surprised at the lack from him.

Just unacceptable premises.

Bill

A cheating (GF this time) no atonement, no penance. And no self respect from the guy.

And she was right. I never liked pot, but many years ago I had a girlfriend who did. I tried it several times and we had some serious talks. I was afraid of exactly this sort of thing and what I learned was that she was never going to be unaware of what she was doing to the point that she cheated on me. The simple truth is that she got into it and she cheated on him. She drank too much and smoked dope because she is immature. That's not wife material.

Walk. The guy could do better than marrying a woman who couldn't keep her legs closed to the temptation of another man before her wedding.

It's a joke to think she would be faithful in the future. The guy was desperate to give her consideration after she was fucking around while engaged to be married to him.

Well written, good build up, intense where he looks everywhere and finally finds her, then it becomes implausible. He finds this guy screwing his fiancée and plays hide and seek with their clothing before confronting them? Then she tells him he was her FWB, got her drunk and raped her? And then he says “ok”, it wasn’t your fault, but let’s spend two weeks apart and we’ll be good. Everyone likes reconciliation, but this is ridiculous. Thank you

but Peter is written as implausibly credulous. She had a story, but nothing he saw indicated it was true. Without some confirmation of her implausible, but possible, tale of woe, I don't see a reconciliation. Instead, the normal response would be to thank God for having dodged a bullet. No one wants to take a chance on marrying and having a family with s woman who may not be trustworthy.

If she is telling the truth she was raped. No cops were called so her tale was BS and that alone makes this story is a crock of shit.

I do not know one single person who would’ve taken the bitch back, not one.

Call her bluff. If he did force her as she said, call the police and get him arrested, if she wont, you know she was complicit and you're getting a used slut.

Randy got off Scot free. Her story indicates she was forced so if true there should have been more retribution.

I also think that unless she was comatose she would have known what was happening. She will need watching.

I see about 7 weeks from Randy screwing Sybil. I would need a bit of verification here. Sybil on the pill? A load of silence about the interim condition of Sybil Not to mention Sybil is a SLUT and Randy will almost certainly nail this tramp again! a very poorly explained and documented account. No story here.... just words!

a word of advice RUN, PETER, RUN!

No man in his right mind would choice that woman to marry. And to have a family together? Ha! That's too funny.

He got married to be married that’s never going to work no matter what she said. She was Randys bitch. He should’ve just gone after Randys wife she had at least a job and half of Randys shit. The writer made a poor decision trying to sound like a nice person and getting them married after that crap.

Sure, she smoked a joint, that is an acceptable reason for her actions. NOT! And Peter is a big pussy, not only forgives the slut but got no revenge whatsoever on randy, give me a break

I thought I had voted one star but it shows up as a 5!!! This is such a load of shit. She smoked a joint and it was ok to turn into a slut? No fucking way that skank ever gets back into my good graces. If she was a good fuck maybe I'd have her as a booty call which is all she sounds like she's good for.

To be adult and even thinking this relationship Post the cheating event would work should have made writing this story a red flag. I’ve read stories with poor makeup themes but, this one is far above any other please rewrite and rethink.

Who would bet half their life savings on this marriage?

c'mon! the story is soooooo sad because you don't know what you really want out of it. it certainly doesn't have any real sense of reality. I'm all for forgiveness, but this might as well be a modern day "hippie" love story. with no real consequences to any of your actions.

A big mistake was writing how Randy neatly had his clothes all folded in the room yet his girls were all tossed about. So she gladly and quickly undressed to get into bed with her former lover and he took his time admiring her waiting on the bed.

Her story of him forcing her sounds like rape and the scenario doesn't match.

If it was rape she would have reported the rape.

In any event had she been mine I would have grabbed constance and said leave them here. Wedding would be off.

Walk away dumbass.

RAAC's can be okay. But Sybil made a choice and the only reason she's upset is that she got caught. How do you forgive and forget that level of stupid? Time to move on and find someone you can trust. Not someone who, every time they go out, you'll be wondering where she is and who she's with. Lousy way to live life.

Perfect, museum quality example of the stock LW weak/cuck male and RAAC. He discovers them in flagrante, and cuck boy doesn't do what any man would do, which is beat the living shit out of Randy and leave the slut. Instead, he takes the slut with him and, like the Pajama Boy he is, sits down to have a "conversation" (all that's missing is the cup of hot chocolate).

The slut's excuses are insufficient, even thought the author thinks so. She got herself a little high; no one forced her to do that. Was it inadvertent, or was it something women often do to rationalize getting a little strange? The latter is consistent with her eagerly agreeing to sent cuck boy off for more booze. She didn't have to leave the party with Randy, and going out into the weather to the cabin would have sobered her up some, certainly enough to realize that the excursion wasn't innocent, even assuming she was ever stupid enough to think so originally. Nevertheless she ent along. This is also consistent with the "she was open to getting some strange" interpretation. She claims she was raped, but was she marked from a struggle? Did she leave when she easily could have when he was folding his clothes? Was she protesting and trying to fight off Randy, or was she obviously fucking Randy back when cuck boy walks in? What about her claim that she didn't want to fuck Randy, but she couldn't fight her body? Cuck boy evidently doesn't have a bullshit detector. So, the cunt has multiple personality disorder? Minds don't work that way. She wanted to fuck Randy and felt some guilt about it at the same time. That's what the real world facts would be. Her version of her "mental state" is just a bogus rationalization designed to allow her to avoid serious consequences for her betrayal. (i.e. a failed plot device used by the author to justify a RAAC). Now, this is a work of fiction, so theoretically the author gets to make the facts what he wants them to be. Unfortunately, the facts of narrative do a piss poor job of supporting the author's intended interpretation and the reconciliation.

If she would have controlled her booze intake and not smoked the weed she might have not put herself in that situation. To further prove to him that she wanted to distance herself from Randy, she should have quit her job so she wasn't in constant contact with him at work.

There is no such thing as a little betrayal!

Go public, ensure everyone knows what a slut she is and how her fuck mate is!

Go for public humiliation, cause as much fuss at their workplace as possible. Use social media as well.

Could her facts be true?

They could.

Do we believe her?

The folded clothes make me doubt it. At the being stripped and dragged to a bedroom, what girl is going to believe a man STRIPPING NAKED is just going to quit? Because I know when I am going to defer from sex, I take my clothes off.../sarc

She shows no hate toward Randy. She didn't demand a rape swab. She didn't quit her job or file a suit against Randy.

She wanted it to be over. A human thing, but makes me think very little of her as a woman and a human.

But here is the thing: PETER should have been demanding those things! He is contemptible. I don't mind the forgiveness thing, but not questioning, not doing anything retaliatory...he desperately wanted to stay with Hottie McHottie Tail and he couldn't WAIT to spend hundreds of dollars trying to prove HIS worth when the shoe was very much on the other foot.

And in five months, none the less!

This was badly written. He was not a man I want to emulate.

The guy is better off without her. Why invite that kind of poison into your life?

man seduced old girl-friend with weed, booze, and getting spouses out of house.

old girl-friend happy to comply. husband finds out, and the other wife finds out.

no charges, no beatings, and the shitty rapist gets to keep his marriage.

main character takes wife back...for...reasons? it's never made clear how she won him back. he basically walked her through it....like a child. he was basically both the man and woman in that relationship. she just had to sit there, be selfish, learn nothing, and agree to whatever he said....which wasn't very much. and...without mentioning any sex they had, or a significant waiting period...she is pregnant. so....is it even his kid? i'm sure every reader is thinking it.

Second of your stories tonight with unpunished rape. This one has an ending that defies belief. That's enough for me.

I've given this author 3 chances now and every one of his male "heroes" turns out to be a spineless , stupid, clueless Cuck - capital "C" intended. There are several of these authors on this site & I'm keeping a list so I don't waste anymore time reading this kind of Cuck crap !

husband: "so you're saying he raped you?"

Wife: "yes"

husband: "lets do absolutely nothing about that."

Just plain ridiculous! After witnessing his "friend" and fiance' fucking, he should have just left them there, but no, you wanted to make up a story of reconciliation, BUT instead it turns into a tale of a wimp/cuckold! IT SUCKED!

She could not control her drinking with him.

She smoked dope with him knowing it made her horny.

She went to his cabin and when he started to take advantage of her, she never cried out, never screamed, just tried to get away under her own strength.

Then, once he was raping her, she got into it.

And then he married her? Are you kidding me?

they don't have any kids - they might be on the lower end of the brain pool. She was stupid for accepting Randy's advances and thing nothing was wrong. Peter wasn't much better believing her and taking her back.

you will need it

if she cheated while she was engaged and he accepted it she now knows there will be no consequences to her cheating again.

if by chance you are thinking of having kids with her better get a lifetime fee for DNA testing you`ll need it

poor sap .......

she goes on to describe how well her ex fucked her and the soyfriend apologizes for his selfishness?

Dude you want to be a piece of shit how gets off on your girl fucking other dudes send her to me

A cheating slut! He's damn lucky he escaped by the skin of his foreskin! ~ Let the dope smoke her dope and cheat on some other poor sap! ~ Also,find a way to lower the boom on randy Randy! (Some fucking friend he turned out to be!) ~ Rated this story a 2 and that was a gift.

do you really think she will be 'about to have an orgasm' as Sybil told Peter?

If she says she was raped then they should have gone to the police. If she wasn't then she was up for it with good old Randy and should have been kicked to the kerb. Not even married and she was already fucking another guy ...... wouldn't bode well for the future. Writing was OK but concepts and character need a bit more thought in my opinion.

Finding your fiancee banging some guy from her workplace and taking her back? Idiot! Like a dog returns to his vomit, so a fool returns to his folly.

This is all wrong. Sybil and Randy can NEVER be trusted again. The cuckhold should have left those two and allowed then to be stranded. He and Constance should have booted both out. But, obviously Randy is the hero of this story. He gets everything.

atleast she dumped his cheating ass. Which is more than the cuckold can say.