All Comments on 'The Story of L'

ive never before commented on a story before, and ive been reading for several years. tonight however, i was able to place myself in your slaves shoes, and hated and loved you for not being able to bring me to climax.

thankyou.

Good stuff. Begs for a sequel

Great story! More please!!

Kudos!!! I enjoyed it a great deal, putting myself in place of the slave and hungering for more. Keep writing.

A well written story. I can place myself on either side of the tale and I look forward to more. Nice to hear that someone else in Texas has my mind set.

An excellent beginning to what I hope will have many chapters.

Great characters and the description of her ten year longing so

well portrayed

god,what a story.and you can't find a dom? with your imagination? how horribly sad.i like it rough but you girl are so very bad.brooklyn

To be original or interesting. Possibly a good editor might have helped.

She needs a real Dom