by cscott8388
Yes, it's about a loving wife...It has just one or two small issues: 1st - Jack's wife have double personality: sometimes she was Lindsey and others she was Carmela...2nd - Where was Lindsey/Carmela while her husband showed up? waiting in the car? And didn't got curious why her husband was taking so long, just to get the thing that he forgot? A so important thing that he forgot completly what it was? Just details, I know...3*
That doesn't understand the difference between Fetish/ BDSM and Loving wives.
WRONG CATEGORY! Lousy story of abuse.
No stars.
This IS a story where the wife gets beat up. That's what's sad. You sick freaks that get off beating women.
We get off on spanking women, and having them spank us, but never beating them.
That having been said it was in the wrong category.
If you need to spank a wife to demo your masculinity it speaks for itself !!! But mental help is always available. Try it, its never to late!!!
I know this is the internet, but do everyone a favor and proofread your story before submitting. Spelling errors, grammatical errors. I couldn't get past the second paragraph.
The Secretary is an interesting film and relevant to the story. The story itself is a hard read with the spelling, grammar and inconsistency of details, as others have said.