All Comments on 'The Summer of Abby'

by Baztrachian

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FictionRomanticFictionRomanticalmost 2 years ago

Older man

Younger woman

Pregnancy risk

Short sweet perfection

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This confused me. "He could feel the ripples inside of her pussy... Moving up on her his cock was now sliding on her clit with every movement. Abby responded by moaning and her hands went to his hips as if to pull him in deeper." Is he in her or is he sliding his cock on her clit? It's very unclear. A penis can only do one of those things at a time.

"She'd never had two orgasms at once before!" Well, she didn't have two orgasms at the same time. It'd be more accurate to say she'd never had back-to-back orgasms or orgasms so close together, something like that.

It was a very enjoyable read. I was looking for something a little different and am not disappointed.

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Someone noticed I have a thing for impregnation and pregnancy risk. It's true. Deal with it.