All Comments on 'The Surgeon's Lodger'

by leeanna19

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LilyFieldLilyFieldabout 2 years ago

If this is indeed an old story, I am happy that it has been re-published. I suppose I missed it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I really liked the story and want to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

oh yes more

leeanna19leeanna19about 2 years agoAuthor

Yes I deleted this story last year along with eveything else. I only had about 80 followers then. Thought some of the new ones might enjoy it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

this was such a great story . TY

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

teasing us ?i was thinking YES !!she's continuing it ....

JessKai1997JessKai1997about 2 years ago

I was wondering I read this from somewhere haha. Couldn't find it somehow.

leeanna19leeanna19about 2 years agoAuthor

There is a lot more to this story. It has some sex, but it is not a sex story. It's a love story. There is pain, sadness, aceptance and love. I had an email form one reader who said they were crying when they read some of it. I will post the nex few pars today. I have to re-write it as I go, as some of it deals with Michelle's early years.

This site does not like anything refering to under 18's no matter how innocent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I too read this story when you first wrote it. It is still a great story and I'm enjoying reading it again.

SabrinaGLangtonSabrinaGLangtonalmost 2 years ago

Love this, I love reading about people falling in love.

CharletteCharlettealmost 2 years ago

Hey Leeanna,

This is such a Chic Flick !

And so cool that it is a Trans Chic Flick !

To me it is a sad situation that some males will dismiss it without learning from it.

So many men should read this or something like it with an open mind. They do not have to see it as only for trans gurls or about only trans gurls. But for what they can learn about the female mind as well as female feelings and desires. Of course some guys know everything so this type of information is lost on their rock head stupidity.

This may be an old writing revised, but it still offers great insights into human behaviors.

Leeanna, this writing could benefit greatly from being edited by a good "human" editor or maybe a slow proof reading to help you see the mistakes.

I do not make these comments to put you down as a writer. Actually I offer them as constructive criticism from a person who did not learn much about the English language in grade school or any other organized schooling. But 73 years of hard knocks life as well as a desire to not sound or look like a buffoon, has taught me so much about the American version of the english language.

But now i am rambling gibberish !

Please continue with this story.

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I write short stories. Mainly TV/CD and trans. Most of my stories and chapters are 1200-1800 words. I try to get to the action quickly. I know a lot of people just want to read a quick sexy story. I notice my trans stories get good ratings, but lower reads. I enjoy writing a...

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