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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

nice story, i hope you plan on writing a series of sequels. there are a lot of ways to twist the plot and multiple players, old couple young couple sex club, farm, wow you have a lot of options to look at as far as the fate of our main character. anything from breed mare, domestic slave, sex toy, club performer, have fun exploring this and i hope to see another chapter at least. don't worry about the negative review trolls, keep writing and thanks for entertaining us with your story.

Paul4playPaul4playover 2 years ago

Well written and arousing….

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Awesome start to stories....what Jennifer is going into is something I thought about doing years ago...housekeeper and fucktoy. Hope you write more .

ThedukeofomniumThedukeofomnium12 months ago

I was surprised at how incredibly erotic this beginning is! now off to read part 2

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Hello everyone! I am the boss in every other aspect of my life. I am a single mother of 2 kids. I work hard and writing is one of my few escapes from reality. I do want any feedback you are willing to provide about my stories. Feel free to reach out to me anytime.

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