by IBme1968
You're right: This dream makes no sense. Even the ending makes no sense. You paint multiple pretty and/or sexy pictures, but you neither finish any of them nor link them into a coherent story.
I have no idea how to rate this.
I loved the sexy story. Dreams seldom make sense but they often leave me either terrified or extremely turned on. Sometimes I have wished that the dream lasted just a little longer. Other times I was really glad it was just a dream!
I felt like I was watching. You painted a good picture.
I would like to know who the lucky person was who woke you. I would have loved to be that person.