All Comments on 'The Sweetest Darkness'

by FOUNTAINPEN67

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AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopover 4 years ago
Interesting twist

Another well written tight chapter. Kristie is going to love her future at Praetorian. She’s going to be a BBC loving slut like me. Xoxoxoxo Annette ♠️♠️♠️💋💋

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopover 4 years ago
Love the story

Kristie will become a wonderful asset for the Praetorian Group. Interesting presentation of Kristie’s first time. She'll become a hit with the team. Great writing. Xoxoxoxo Annette ♠️♠️♠️💋💋

Brittni4uBrittni4uover 4 years ago
5 star epic story

Great job! You are a great writer and I hope everyone enjoys this as much as I did. The plot was well designed. I loved the name of the girl! Kisses...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Had me so wet!

Superb writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Holy shit!

This is so well written, so dark and sexy that I'm breathless for most part of this. The Nosferatu club sounds like the Admiral's Arms.

And the man! Karl! I want a man like him who can satisfy me las well as he. He makes me yearn for the seduction of his touch.

And oh! Anette Bishop is on the comments. Hi girl! Nice of you to graze us with your presence. ;))

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Amazballs!!!!

Wow...that was something I'll read whenever I feel horny...and man that crude language does that for me...it was a turn on!

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Hello everyone... with spring I have several new projects I am completing and a few more in the works. You'll see I am dabbling in short stories like The Chair; Our Stage and Private Box but I also have a few longies in the works. I'm working on chapter four of Lusty Lynn-Sexy...