All Comments on 'The Switch Pt. 03'

Bit of a weird twist, but still a very good story.

C'mon next installment!!!

Wow what a chapter of action. Please dont take long leaving us with a clif hanger like that. Im not sure i like the fact annie hasnt tried to reach out or find out info.

If this ends up with them apart and not living their dream of kids in a new country this will suck.

You should have annie flynto france theyvstay with arthur till they male plans. Dad relocates far away from mom and she us cut out of their lives.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ fantastic episode

Can't wait for the next chapter. Love this writer.

A true Writer of stories knows how to capture the attention of their audience. WELL DONE! Looking forward to the next piece

Hate cliffhangers! Not very respectful of your readers.

Great story. Hope the next chapter comes out soon.

LOL The entitled American, tend to forget when you leave home you leave American rules behind.

Didn't like the twist you did. The twins shouldn't have left. Dani was obsessed with Alex but then just leaves with her brother? Alex should have kept Annie and Dani

Plot matters. The most interesting part of an erotic story to me is the journey TO the sex, why did they get where they are? Siblings don't "suddenly" manifest sexual feelings for one another, they've been bubbling in the background for years, hiding within normal famlial emotions between brother and sister. At some point, they act on them or don't, and most don't, living their lives unusually close but not THAT close. When they do move on and have this feeling something is missing for the rest of their lives.

Happened to me, I wonder to this day, "What if?" And no, it can't, she passed about 25 years ago, cancer.

I love this story! 5 stars! Please, chapter 4!

Dude, please finish this story!

More!😭

I'm sorry for the extremely long wait but It will be a little bit before I will be able to finish anymore installments of this story. I was in accident, a woman ran a red light and I hit her on my motorcycle. The road has been a long just to get where I'm at now and I still need help for even the smallest things. Just typing this with one finger is very time consuming and exhausting. My left side took the impact and I still don't have full use of my left side. I hope to be writing again soon but I don't know how long it will be before I can. Thank you for the kind comments and hopefully I can get back soon. I will copy and paste this on my bio as well for everyone else to see.

Yours truly,

Behindhandwriter

I very much enjoy your story, well done. I hope you get better fast and recover, being a combat vet I know somewhat of what you are going through.

To help you immediately might I suggest a voice to text application/program for what ever you are using to communicate with some are better than others and are able to learn your voice and inflections better.

I have experience as an editor and proof reader mainly as an Aero Engineer but also as a Constitutional Historian. I am retired and have a wide breadth of knowledge, from being an A&P Mechanics license, having an FFC Certification, being a Machinist, Mechanical and Electronics Engineer, a Historian, and a Martial Artist since age 14 and a Japanese swordsman since I was 20, I am now 68.

If I am able to help you in a way I am able please ask. mike.spivey@att.net

Such unfortunate accident. I hope you recover soon and well. Don't worry too much about minor things, like writting an erotic story now, just relax and rest. Stress always gets in the way of full recovery.

Take care.

Great story but please finish it.

I hope you’re doing well and can make another part of this soon. Been dying to see where this goes

Any update on when you’ll be back?

I just wanted to post that I hope you are recovering from the accident and will be able to resume your writing soon. I have found your story lines to be much more engaging than most on this site, with good characterization and excellent plots. And I hope you have some future karma planned for dear old Mom, who is a first class bitch. Get better quickly!

Sorry to hear about the accident, looking forward to reading more once you have recovered.

It has left me hanging. Sounds a little like Alex and his injuries. Hope you can finish this.

Very much enjoy your stories and writing, look forward to the conclusion or continuation of this one. Hope each day brings some small improvement for you. Your readers will be here when your ready.

would love to read the rest of this story when you are able to finish it

12/16/2022

Hello all,

After countless trips to rehab, I find myself in better spirits and able to write again. I have gained most of the strength back in my left arm and no longer need someone to fetch everything for me. I am guilty of taking extra time to work on myself. I feel it was required to regain not only my mobility but also my self-esteem. Being unable to do the things I quickly had done before and solely relying on someone else was quite discouraging. Even though the people surrounding me wanted no more than to help me, it was still embarrassing. Helpless was something I’d never experienced before, and I hope I’m senile when it is required again. :)

I would like to thank each and every one of you that reached out to me by email and in the comment section to check on my progress. It usually took me a few days to respond, and I apologize for that.

At this point, I don’t have an exact time frame for when the next part will be released, but I hope to have it done in the next few weeks. I hope you all have a wonderful holiday, and I will see you in the pages next year.

Yours truly,

Behindhandwriter

Really Good!

I have loved this story up to this point and can't wait for the next chapter .

To anyone who’s new here, you’re so lucky, hopefully the wait is almost over, some of us have been waiting almost a full year for the next part

You have an excellent method of handling taboo genres. I certainly hope that you finish this series the same way.

Thank you