All Comments on 'The Taking of Catherine Pt. 01'

I loved everything about this story! I really hope it continues soon.

Not a bad story, but the writing was stilted, disjointed and therefore difficult to read. Try reading out loud when you proof.

Try figuring out whose perspective you are writing from and staying consistent throughout. Loved the story and elements and some of the descriptions, but consistency was a bit off. ;)

Can't wait for the next part