All Comments on 'The Taming of Zar'ahk Pt. 01: Dinae'

Wow, really well written! Hot, erotic, exciting. Kudos! I hope you continue. Good luck!

Sexy and exciting story!

Great first story here! Keep up the awesome work.

I don't normally read straight sex stories, but the fantasy theme intrigued me, and boy was I glad I clicked. Excellent piece of work, I look forward to reading your next story.

Thank you all so much for the warm welcome, and reading my first story. It was a lot of fun to write, and I'm currently in the middle of part two. There's much more to come in Zar'ahk's story. I'm going to give patrons an early look at each chapter about a week before it releases here, so if you just can't wait and want to read it before anyone else head on over to my patreon page and consider becoming a patron. https://www.patreon.com/nickijamesauthor

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Love the story. Steamy but with a great ending

Pretty good, for your first one, hope to see more

Great stuff, can't wait to read more!

That was really nicely written, a bit hastened for my tastes, but still the build up was pretty believable. What I liked the most was the tenderness between them, the fact that the elven girl decided to overcome her racial prejudices and took care of a wounded and defenseless orc. Of course, the sight of his massive cock was very helpful for her ;)

I'm curious where you're going to take this story. The ending of this chapter left you a few options. A new take on Romeo and Julia but in elven/orcish edition? :) Looking forward to reading it. 5 stars.