All Comments on 'The Teacher: Introduction'

Too short opening to what we hope will be a long story.

The detail is great for starters. Definately need another 'hour' to follow this first 'five-minutes'!

I promise, there is more to come! Since first writing this part, I have been working on the next chapter. Hopefully submitting within the next day or so. Thank you so much for your comments. Suggestions on where these lessons will lead is always appreciated. Arrrgghh I hate having to rate myself to post a reply!

It is a great start ,I can't wait for more

...too short. The story is a tease, and as such, it works. Will there be more? Or will the "little one" be forever stuck on that bed, bound in limbo? I hope not!

I was realy getting into the story. What happened at the middle and end? Are you setting us up for part two? Maybe, yes, no? Anyway it is a great story, please don't stop your writings.