All Comments on 'The Temptation of Laura'

Hope there is a part 2

Great start! Please continue this story!

Really looking forward to part 2! Loved the story and the characters.

I really enjoyed this. Great descriptions… and good fun!!

Great story looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work and thank you.

Great start. Looking forward to part 2.

I look forward to the next part.

Verrrry good story telling. Hope you find time to extend it.

Amazing story. Great details. Came twice before finishing the entire story. Absolutely loved the storyline.

Read part two before reading this submission. I usually read to 3.5k max words but knew from part two that I needed the back story. You write sucintly, build characters and potential directions beautifully. Now it all makes sense. Wonderful to read and reminisce.

I may not be trans but have fallen to the wiles of a daughter's friend . . . So I can relate.

I join others in awaiting further chapters,

Amazing story! Really enjoyed it!

Very nice story. Abby sounds like a little minx. On to part two.