All Comments on 'The Terraces Ch. 02'

by Winefiend

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Oldsalty1Oldsalty14 months ago

About as HOT as an Exhibitionist story can get, nicely brought along. the only slightly off note seemed to be the instant and unabashed acceptance by Rachel--seeing her husband wanking to the naked and beautiful Claire across the road should have produced at least a temporary hissy fit and minor meltdown. Other than that, nearly perfect erotic tale!

WinefiendWinefiend4 months agoAuthor

Thanks for the lovely comments. I'll be addressing Rachel's immediate acceptance of Pete's behaviour in the next chapter.

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