All Comments on 'The Text Comes'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great

Excellent read, great descriptions. Please write more. Thanks.

LustyBusty10LustyBusty10over 4 years ago
Hot!

I really like how descriptive your story is because as a fellow writer, I also perfered to show the reader the intimate scenes rather than tell them because this is more enjoyable. I am just not as authentically good at it as you're but a girl can still try. Thanks for the hot read.

unknownmuseunknownmuseover 4 years ago
Taboo

“He bites my shoulder, careful not to leave a mark...” I like this detail. Intoning he has a wife waiting at home and his lover is smart enough to necessitate an explanation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent pace and detail.

This is one of best. Pace is great. Realistic in details both as to emotion and sex.

bobcat753bobcat753over 2 years ago

My first guy called me "baby" and was black as well. I never went down on him, but did jack off his anaconda. It seemed like it was nine inches of solid girth. I have no idea what his cum tastes like, but now I wish I had taken and tasted him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well done. I can relate having been there myself. Written from experience?

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