All Comments on 'The Thief in the Corner Office Pt. 10'

#1 rule of writing, SHOW, do not tell. You are doing a whole lot of telling and showing less and less.

yeah, I agree with the other comment, Bill says he loves Alice, but the next thing she's in the suburbs and he's away for weeks. I kinda wanted to see how Bill would react if something goes wrong and Alice is needed to fix it.

Interesting series. I like the way the characters evolve from the beginning to the end.

Typical male attitude, I think this story is just getting started keep up the great writing.