All Comments on 'The Third Wheel'

by shimm2

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SyleusSnowSyleusSnow9 months ago

Five stars. The competition between the girls was well done and added an interesting angle to what would have otherwise been a straightforward first time tale. Loved the twist of Ally not really being pregnant (baby trapping a guy being pretty common in such situations) and how it backfired on her.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Needs part 2

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