All Comments on 'The Tide of Rot Ch. 01'

Wow, I think I just got a new Fetish... Well done.

I like the use of the Fog to lower inhibitions, that is always the hardest part in corruption stories, what starts the slide.

I hope we get to see Shael and Alea's children. The idea of created undead children was an interesting one.

I look forward to the next chapter.

As someone that has made squick fetish content for a decade, I can say you have done a very, very good job here. I suppose as an author, I would only point out that on occasion, you will jump between past and present tense here and there, but over all, this was very well written and is absolutely erotic. Loved it! Two claws up!

Very well written and thoroughly enjoyable. Great work.

Great first chapter! Can't wait for the next part.

I think it was great, though I kind of wish there could have been more disgust at the undead before they gave into depravity!