All Comments on 'The Time at the Beach Pt. 02'

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1stltdan about 2 months ago

Thank you Great premise using time travel

Red_22b about 2 months ago

Love this series of stories

CILMArae about 2 months ago

Oh boy!! I love a cliffhanger! Keep it up! Thanks for sharing your talents!

redlion75 about 2 months ago

I'm getting a headache from the jumping

home_close about 2 months ago

EdDB 17 days ago

Just when you are reading the end of a great story . . . “Hello Dad”. Can’t wait to read where this is going.

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Been writing for a while, will be posting more, all that were mostly written for my wife. As much as I love feedback, be polite! As one of my readers pointed out, this is an amateur site, I'm no professional and write to arouse, not to make a living. Some of my stories have ...

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