All Comments on 'The Time Device Ch. 04 - The Baliff'

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RobertFettRobertFett7 months agoAuthor

Chapter 5 started today!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Interesting premise. Looking forward to your next chapter.

TwistedDaveAuthorTwistedDaveAuthor3 months ago

Now that was a chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Can you go even darker? Though if you keep the current style that would be okay too.

RobertFettRobertFettabout 1 month agoAuthor

I could go darker, but then I worry that it wouldn't give me creative room for further plot development, you know?

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