All Comments on 'The Time in my Hands Ch. 01'

this is crap, one star

boh!

let's see ...

No point in this at all.

This made me cum hard. The paragraph about the slaves caressing Rose.

I must recommend that you stick to writing in your native language. I do not mean to be harmful with this comment, but I must state that your english grammar is horrendous. Every single sentence in this story has nothing but comma splices, words put out of order, and general nonsensical structure. The story is almost completely incomprehensible as a result. I believe you are using Google Translate for a lot of this, and for the sake of making a point: Eso es un error. I'm sure there's a good story in here somewhere but it is being masked by an extremely aweful translation.