All Comments on 'The Toll'

That was delightful. Very funny and I like the twist at the end.

This was such a fun little story. You hooked me in early and I just ke[t smiling rough each of her stories. Loved it.

Thank you both, aperson and xellie! It was a LOT of fun to write!

You did a great job with the stammers and the pauses to give Ariel's stories a real sense of flustered innocence. I could almost see the expression on her face change with each ellipsis.

Delightful language, big vocabulary, interesting story. Well done. Thank you.

In the tradition of Bilbo and Beorn... with a twist! Well told... you had me smiling from "I'll do it." Congrats on a fun read.

A fantastic story. Great conversation, funny, intriguing, entertaining, sparking my imagination; I just love it.

Hilarious. Thank you.