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All Comments on 'The Tour Pt. 01'

by Blusky999

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sparktjsparktjalmost 5 years ago

In your bio you state you are an academic, teaching at a university. However your spelling is poor and this story is both implausible and badly written. God help your students.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Too many literals and mistakes

You need a proof reader. Your piece is littered with far too many literals, some of them so bad they detract from what you are trying to say.

symtronsymtronalmost 5 years ago
R-U-N Forrest R-U-N !!

lol...

Great loved it...5 stars (seriously run, disappear)

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