All Comments on 'The Transformed Man Ch. 06'

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C_frommnC_frommnover 13 years ago
Getting Better

Like the Longer Chapter and the Minotaur aspect was a great idea.

cant wait to see what Tom is up to Next?

BlknMild611BlknMild611about 13 years ago
Great JOB!!!

I'm Lov'in IT!!!

C_frommnC_frommnabout 13 years ago
What About?

Lacey from Chapter 1 is she going to come back?

will she be apart of the Harem and Maybe bring some Money and Intelligence to the Harem?

vargas111vargas111almost 13 years ago
Odd

Isn't it WRONG when a story ends with a BJ?

I wanted to see a whole harem of pregnant hotties.

C_frommnC_frommnover 11 years ago
Now!

That he has a start on a Harem. What happened to Lacy from the Clinic if she is as Addicted as the others then she should be there. Not to mention considering how Tough he is on them they Need more Help! They are 6 and he is wasting them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Amazing!

Love, love, LOVED this! It's so freaking hot and has me incredibly turned on! I would love to see them just milk his cock and collect his spunk to be slipped into food or drink for other women when hosting a party or something and turn it into an all out orgy. Have a cum bath. Yum!

spankfunforspankfunforover 9 years ago
Cum-Addicted Harem!

Most Men want to be Tom, 12 inch cock and Any Woman He Wants! Every Woman Who is in His Personal Space, lives to Please Him! Great Story! Why Did You Stop This Story?

C_frommnC_frommnover 8 years ago
YES!!!

Why have you given up on the story. And what of the Woman from the Lab. When does she come back into the Picture. Will the Girl's continue to work or will they find a Rich widow,Divorcee to help with the Money and Cock.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Yes another good story goes unfinished that happens a lot on here

devildog0302devildog0302about 4 years ago
Any chance

That you’ll come back to it and bring it to some type of conclusion?

desirelitdesirelitabout 4 years agoAuthor
If you want a conclusion, or more

If you want a conclusion or more I’ll write more for this story.

mrfox_stingermrfox_stingerover 3 years ago
Conclusion please

Please add the conclusion. I want to know what happen next. Would he make them pregnant. Would that lead to creation of new race. Please don't leave the story hanging

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