All Comments on 'The Trap'

I have just seen a few grammar and spelling mistakes. I apologise for these before the grammar Nazi's junp down my throat. If any of them want to be my proof reader. Please let me know. I tend to focus on the story. I can read t several times and still miss obvious mistakes.

Nicely written leenanna19. You can always fix the typos in your original manuscript. Then resubmit it. Make sure it has the same title followed by the word Edited. Your corrected version will appear in a day or two.

Very well written I Toby is a lucky man

Consequently all men leave the country and it collapses with no workers and no sperm. Dumb and dumber.

This is se in Freddie Clegg's universe. The borders are closed, and although some men got away early on, The ones left cannot leave. In his stories, there are smuggling gangs.

These stories aren't meant to be serious. I know (most) men would beat the crap out of a woman that tried to whip them etc. Without men doing "men's" jobs, the country would starve and shut down in days. This was written for fun.