All Comments on 'The Trial'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The title is correct, but throughout the story you confuse trail for trial šŸ˜­

Siteseeker020Siteseeker020over 1 year ago

This could use a sequel with further tests and exploration on Emma's part.

PandelusionPandelusionover 1 year ago

This was a bit more rushed than your normal work which is a disappointment. But overall still a fun story to read and enjoy. keep it up. :)

StripClubAdventuresStripClubAdventuresover 1 year ago

Another great story. Love the facial that Emma gets from Bill!

SubmissiveCelesteSubmissiveCelesteover 1 year ago

Different Emma but I liked it. Good job and as usual hot. I want to suck cock now. šŸ˜€šŸ˜€šŸ˜€ My other half is going to get a good blow job thanks to you. Lol

bodunk2kbodunk2kabout 1 year ago
Good but i and a swap?

Trail used for trial and dairy used for diary. I would put in some email editor to check the grammar solid story. Maybe can go further next time sex or glory hole.

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