by Hotelroom
That was a good story. You took a common theme but you made it your own by not immediately escalating it to out of control sex crazed nympho but instead to ramp things up slowly which I believe would be a more normal reaction. That is what made it more real. I think this could be a fun but short series of what happens when things do finally escalate. Maybe have them both change on a Friday night and spend the weekend out and about to see how life is from the opposite perspective. I look forward to enjoying more of your work.