All Comments on 'The Trials of Dave Pt. 03'

Originally thought the pace was too slow. Having read, from the beginning, I now know your timing of the development is ideal.

Enjoy your smaller chapters and am looking forward to Mistress further developing Davina to the Sissy she really wants to be.

Well done.

Thanks Anonymous, I usually find other stories too quick so expect the opposite to be directed at me. Part 4 is awaiting moderation. Had always been planning on it as a four part story but now think there are a lot more places I can take it. Still, currently writing a stand alone story first.