All Comments on 'The Trophy Wife Recruiter'

by Uniquetongue

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

How does one manage to write such shitty stories in succession. Not only are they unbelievable, factually incorrect and completely void of reality .......... they suck. Do everyone a favor and quit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I actually like the story. A bit more description about how the characters felt about getting a big black cock inside them would help. A description of. Their exhilaration and the strength of their orgasms would add a lot. Don't be discouraged by rude critics!

UniquetongueUniquetongueabout 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks Anonymous.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

good premise, but the writing can be much better. If you were either more descriptive or slow down, you wouldn't jump so much.

For example, you jump from one caressing him to the other saying she can deepthroat him better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good story keep writing a little more description would make it 5 star

newmantopleasenewmantopleaseabout 3 years ago

Pretty good actually. make it a little longer and this would definitely be a lot more of a fun read rather than being so quick & over.

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